Jerry critiqued our class for this project and he thought that if I completely took out the words "one nations pulse affects every nation" it would be even stronger. So, I tried it. Below is what it would look like without the words:
Friday, November 16, 2007
The World's Pulse revised
I revised the World's Pulse video a little bit so here is the new version that I turned in:
Jerry critiqued our class for this project and he thought that if I completely took out the words "one nations pulse affects every nation" it would be even stronger. So, I tried it. Below is what it would look like without the words:
Jerry critiqued our class for this project and he thought that if I completely took out the words "one nations pulse affects every nation" it would be even stronger. So, I tried it. Below is what it would look like without the words:
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